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The Grey Lady by Loony-Lucy The Grey Lady by Loony-Lucy
Harry and the Grey Lady - Deathly Hallows, chapter 31: ...and she lifted aside the cloak she wore to reveal a single dark wound in her white chest.

Made for :iconvizen:'s challenge (draw a scene in a corridor of Hogwarts).

Detail here: [link]

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EDIT: changed the background perspective a bit.
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HadassaAria Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
very nice!
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Loony-Lucy Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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skyrose-prim Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So gorgeous <3
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Loony-Lucy Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Oo-Lily-oO Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
Thanks for all these Deathly Hallows drawings ! Your work is amazing by the way ! ;-)
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Loony-Lucy Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:aww: thank you so much!
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Oo-Lily-oO Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
You're welcome ;-)
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kate44 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Nicely done:)
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hyenacub Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist
I love the transparency of the Grey Lady... Very nicely done.

There's something I have noticed with some of your work, I hope you don't mind me pointing it out. It's something I did for a long time, too, until someone else pointed it out to me. :grin: It was an epiphany for me.

Your figures and background don't match. I looked at this one a long time, trying to figure out why it looked like Harry and the Lady were leaning away from the viewer...and it's the background.

Your view on the figures is straight on...as if we're standing a few yards away, watching. But the view of the hallway, while wonderful, is as if from a very high vantage point. With that hallway, we should see a lot more of the tops of their heads...and above view.

What would help with that is to bring the line of the wall down a lot more, and have the ceiling line on either side of the hallway slant down a whole lot more to make it look like the hallway is receding. (Hope that made sense...it's hard to explain. Would be easier to show.) That way you'd get the same straight-on, standing-on-the-floor view as we get with the figures.

Individually, they're great. The figures have good expressions and nice colors. The Lady's dress looks awesome and her anatomy looks really good. And the hallway is nicely detailed and textured. The two just don't quite match up. I hoe this will be of some help!
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Loony-Lucy Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! Yeah, I know what you mean, at first I didn't notice, but now I see that something's wrong with perspective. That's probably because I made the background first (a thing I never do, hating backgrounds :XD:), and used copy/paste for the figures (another thing I never do :D).
I think it may be easy to fix, having the original .psd file with all the layers (at least the bottom part- I assume the ceiling is high enough that we don't see it!)
Thank you so much for your advice! :-)
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